Drop_Rock_Collab_Updated.mp3 ( 3.08MB )
Number of downloads: 572Participants: 10
1 kaznie_NL
2 leedbreak
3 Outlaw2112
4 kjutte
5 Marek Rojewski
6 USAMAN
7 Alex Lewis
8 LPR9
9 DaniHel
10 JVM
Comments:As usual I'll write a positive critic and a study direction to improve
1 kaznie_NL Listening to this collab, I can say for sure that you made big improvement over a short period of time (comparing to previously collab) both timing and guitar sound, ideas are more concise and the solo is structured.
I feel the guitar sound a little bit to much effected, I know that is a matter of taste, but sometime can hide mistake, specially when practicing use a dry as possible sound
2 leedbreak Great idea to create a complementary riff that works in time with the one in the backing, a clever use of repetition to create interest and a nice anding a fast scale run, everything played with a dark sound as I like.
Really not too much to complain here, try to work more with a metronome, it's never enough
3 Outlaw2112 Clean playing with no mistake in the execution, and a crazy chorused distortion, very unusual and unique
try to add more rhythm variations as you have done in the final part, mixing different rhythm figures, sequences are cool but overdo can produce a boring effect
4 kjutte Great vibrato man! nice sweep picking and good strong ideas
as usual is a matter of taste, but I'll work more on guitar sound, you reached a good level of playing, you need something more professional for your recording
5 Marek Rojewski Nice solo, well structured with good ideas, nice picking and timing
work more on your guitar sound, too much bright to my ears and no mids. Low mids are the body of the guitar, never cut them on solo sounds
6 USAMAN Nice Zakk Wyldesque blues riffing and pentatonic picking, I like the sound and the vibrato.
Bending are not always in tune, nearly there, but you can improve it working with a tuner and some bending licks
7 Alex Lewis Great solo, sound, timing. You used different techniques with mastery and doubled the ending riff...good Job!
This is really a personal improvement: I really prefer wide and slow vibrato, to short & fast, the one you use most in your solo, listen to yourself carefully and experiment with it, at least you have to be able to play both kinds
8 LPR9 Great "Alex Lifeson/Rush" sound, dist+Phaser makes the guitar sound "moves" I really enjoyed the double stop riffs you put in there and the solo in general
the alternate picking part is not well "quantize" work slowly with a metronome on repetitive patter and your speed will increase sooner as you might expect
9 DaniHel Nice "liquid" sound and melodic soloing, great sweep technique, legato and phrasing in general...good job man!
there is really not to much to be angry here
as you can hear your sound was higher on the left channel, maybe you can invest some time improving recording quality, you have good technique and melodic ideas, you deserve it
10 JVM fantastic "crying" opening and initial riffing with great melodic ideas, good timing too
last part of the doublestop bending is out of tune and ruins the initial effect, also spend same time on guitar sound, try to add more "body"
I'm sure you didn't had much time on this one, with a bit of practice could became a great solo
Thanks everybody to join my collab