This is a better take! Well done. You still need to improve your bends, (to reach perfect pitches) and adjust a bit the timing to make the riffing and phrasing sound tighter and groovier. Keep on the hard work!
Cosmin Lupu
Jun 28 2012, 10:08 AM
Hey man! Congrats on the improvements There's nothing I would add, so follow the advices given by Gabe and you should be going up the ladder even more!
Cosmin
Alex Feather
Jun 30 2012, 10:13 AM
I can hear a bog improvement! Good job! You still need to work on this tune especially on your bends! But I can see that you are working hard! 9 From me! Keep it up!
skennington
Jul 1 2012, 04:42 PM
9!
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