Original lesson: Octave Licks Clean Soloing by Gabriel Leopardi





Links to previous attempts at this lesson:
http://guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_forum/index.php?showtopic=48442

Now the tone is muuuch better! Nice, bright and clean with no lack of treble You've also improved Your tuning. There are still some timming issues like 0:31. I'm not quite shure how to rate Your take - I know it's hard to play in time while there is only a rhythm guitar in the backing track. So...considering Your improvements and the fact there is no precise drum beat I'll pass You this time Good job!

Hi mate! I think that this take is better than the previous one. There are some parts where you had timing issues that now sound perfect. There are still some licks, mostly from the solo that should sound tighter but you are very close. Work one the solo phrases until you can play them at the correct timing and then connect everything.
Keep on the hard work!

Hey mate, congrats on the improvement, which is fairly obvious!

I don't have any other things to add aside from what the guys have already pointed out, but I will say that the lead part, needs a little volume boost in the mix, as in this moment, it's a bit buried in there..

Keep rocking,

Cosmin

Pass: 8