Hey there Sumit!
Sounds like a fair take to me, but here are my suggestions in order for you to improve this one:
- that bend at 0:17 - it reached the pitch, but the timing was not perfect - I would also suggest you to use the ring finger and the middle finger when bending, for more support.
- 0:37 - there should've been another note there
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- try to put more feeling, when playing - at this point, it is very close to being correct, but since it's a simple piece, it needs more interpretation and flow, so that you may bring out the best in it.
Keep rocking mate!
Cosmin