Once Again Great work! But we would be useless if You would not point any details to fix
1. I think in the beginning part You could have more relaxed wrist and keep most of the motion drectly from it
2. You could take away a bit of distortion so You won't feel addicted to right hand muting the noises
3. 0:49 timming went a bit off
4. 0:20 - something get not clear in there
5. 0:40 - this bend is short so quite hard to get always in tune but possible
6. 0:47 similar thing - needs a bit more to reach the correct pitch
Anyway when i first listened to it without seeing You play I had no huge compliments - I enjoyed it
Well done