Hi there, this is a really interesting take because, despite the errors, you've got a really good vibrato and feel.
The first half of the lead playing goes well. The tone is full, the vibrato is nice and wide and the timing is good.
From around 0:57 you cut the phrases a little short by moving too quickly to the next notes or phrases. So you're just in front of the beat a little bit, ok? Nothing too serous. Just try to relax into the beat and don't shift too early and then those sections will sound excellent.
If you can, try to get some vibrato on those last notes of the open string sequence, like at 1:15 and beyond. You'll probably have to use upwards vibrato for those, like Piotr does, because being on the B string doesn't allow much room for downwards vibrato.
For those last bends, some vibrato would also give them a bit more life. Your vibrato technique is good to use it