Hi Fabio, this is a solid take which has good foundations but you just need to work on some technical details:
- At 0:06 you accidentally mute the open high E string.
- The legato run at 0:28 is a bit incoherent so I would work on some legato exercises or some hammer/pull drills just to build up some finger strength and free up the fingers even more.
- The tremolo picking part at 0:30 is supposed to be played as 16th note triplets but you're playing them as straight 16th notes so it's a lot slower than the lesson intended.
You've got a good base of technique - you just need to work on picking speed, finger independence and vibrato for a while