Hey there!
I generally think that there is a common mistake in thinking that playing tempo is a reference of how hard the lesson is. Playing actually cointains lots of various articulation techniques. Usually we need to spend some honest amount of time to workout the basics of each technique separately. It means, that when we take a combo like this one, it's natural it brings more trouble than expected
My first impression is that the beginnin was more condifent even if it had some timing issues. Now towards the end things start to fall apart. Final bends need serious workout.
Around 0:20 you need to organize your picking. Your right hand hesitates and behaves wierd, wondering which notes to pick in which direction.
As for the bends - you need to spend some time working out your pitch detection skills. In this take you tend to overpitch the half-step bends and underpitch the whole-step bends.
Vibrato - you need to practise the "pulsing". Now you are holding the note a little sharp while you vibrate it. It makes it sound a little out of tune. To do that correctly you need to always cross the "zero tension" point with your finger. Pull and let the string go back naturally while still holding the finger on the fret - that's how it works in simplest words.
General tip:
Besides E1 string it is usualyl easier to have good control over the pitch if you vibrate the string downwards rather than bending it up as you do mostly in this take. It is as simple as that and could be a solution.
I hope you got some creative feedback that will help you develope your skills even better. Have great time playing guirta!